Sep. 6th, 2003

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I'm not allowed to sympathize with Tony right now - not with what I need to do in Damaging. The problem is, the more I contemplate the situation I've put him in, the more I'm inclined to switch to his POV. Which isn't an option, I don't think. Not the way I would do it, anyway. Working in Lucas' POV with switches to Brody or Wendy every now and then leaves "reality" open. Using Tony would mess up the flow.

Why isn't Bridger more involved? I almost completely forgot about him. I may have to rewrite the last couple scenes again. Grrr... Why must I make this a good fic? If I wasn't trying so hard, I'd be done by now!
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I don't have much to say today... so I'm not sure why I'm even bothering with an update.

I still can't believe I forgot about Bridger. How awful is that? I mean, on the one hand it's okay because that means there won't be any "Bridger tries to understand Lucas' pain" scenes before the big breakdown, but on the other hand, I'm fairly certain Bridger would notice Lucas' weird behavior leading up to it, even if he was busy.

I think a "Kiddo, we need to talk about the fact you're giving us all the creeps" scene would ruin the mood.

Would or should Bridger be more involved? Anyone?

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